Monday, August 2, 2021

india's holiday writing

 

Today I was learning how to use a hook sentence,paragraphs,dialog and to describe what we saw and how we felt.

I enjoyed talking about what happened in the holiday and giving information to the reader.

I found it challenging to give information.

My digital learning object shows that i can use a hook sentence.

Next time I would change
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  1. NoahAugust 3, 2021 at 9:50 AM

    Kia ora India.
    My name is Noah and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how you Dialog.
    I learned that you can do Gymnastics.
    Maybe you could add speech marks.

    Please visit my blog here https://saintmarysgisnoahs.blogspot.com/2021/02/nau-mai-haere-mai.html#comment-form

    Mā te wā
    From Noah.

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  2. JasmineAugust 3, 2021 at 10:03 AM

    Kia ora India
    My name is Jasmine and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how you used hook sentence.
    I learned that you love TikTok.
    Maybe you could make a bigger hook sentence.

    Mā te wā
    From Jasmine .gr

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  3. LilyAugust 3, 2021 at 10:27 AM

    Kia ora India
    My name is Lily and I am in Room 4 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked how you talked your mum into getting Tik Tok.
    I learned that i can have a hook sentence,dialog,paragraphs and to describe what i saw and felt.
    Maybe you could add some dialog.

    Please visit my blog https://saintmarysgislilyl.blogspot.com/2021/02/nau-mai-haere-mai.html?showComment=1613601009736#c317957943372975637

    Mā te wā

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